Oh! Great story! I kinda made something similar to this. It's called The Catalyst's Rebellion (aka TCR). Would you like to see/review? Sorry to ask. Keep up the good work!

hm this looks very interesting. i like it thus far. hope you update soon.

WOW! Very good! I loved every moment of it! :) If its not compleated, please do continue! :)
Impefection1610

Aside from some spelling errors, you have written a good and interesting story. I am curious to see what happens next to Ace. Also, it sorta has a Cyborg 009 or Astro Boy kinda feel to it. But I guess that's just me. Still, I can't wait to read the next chapter.

~Deathscythe Outlaw

Keep writing!

it was really interesting! It was well written too, i like the details- you use a lot of good metaphors and stuffs. other than stocking up on some details on some places you are good. as for those places, i'd say re read your story back wards and if you don't understand a part then add a little more detail. 8.7/10

Ooer I like it, apart from a few spelling mistakes it was great ^^ *faved*

I enjoyed it very much. I was expecting it to be more like Dark Angel, but it wasn't. I was very glad to read that it wasn't...
I'm quite curious on what's going to happen next.
This shall be interesting...