NO u must update this if ur alive

lol this is cute. i get a very bi-polar, schizophrenic feel from Jesse...i actually like how this is in 3rd POV. :D looking forward to the update..

I like the story so far, I think you should change it to 1st person, mostly because I like reading stories from first person more! Write more please!

Yeah, first pov would actually fit very well with this chapter. So far I'm liking what you've written and I'm looking forward to reading more!

This is SO gay. Literally.

haha. sorry. I just couldn't pass up the opportunity since you put it in the author's note. anywho, awesome story. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE continue.

i'll be your best friend forever. :D

update soon!

This story is really, really, interesting
i hope you keep updating, it's beautiful
i really hope to read more in the near future

so far I like it xD haha I know not much happened but it was a good read =)
well I don't know what else to say other then I'll be looking forward to the developments ^-^v