wow... short but to the point. one can feel the emptyness or empending doom kinda anywhoo. Rather short I personally think you may want to consider writing something longer. Just a thought but I like it though. Well done =)

I love this; its just hardcore simple, to the point and here's how it is..there really isn't much to say--just simply without you my world is dark, I shouldn't have to say much more

great piece, very artistic, very nice...keep it up! ^_^