I don't know what triggered it, but got teary eyed reading this. It was a great poem, definitely something I'l pass alon to my friends. Great job on this poem! It was excellent. :)

Content-wise, I like it a lot. You have a way of telling the absolute truth with your writing, and I like that a lot.

And now for a suggestion: If you broke your lines where it worked with the rhythm or the meaning rather than with the sentence structure, you can emphasise the more important words. It also gives the poem a sense of movement with its rhythm.

I think this is fantastic, personally.

Definatly relatable to most people, ideas are conveyed well. I enjoyed it.

Jaja, sounds like you're writing about me. I like it for the sheer relatability. I'm really in no shape to give constructive criticism, sorry =X.