*Wails* What? Must I come up with my own backstory for this?
I love this poem for its nightmarish feel. Poor Asteria, no matter what she has done, she does not deserve such as greusome death.

Creepy. Only a few times does the excellent, singsongy rhythm break.

Everything about Asteria is great. its intense. I really like the way you wrote this one. My favorite line of all is "Skin rotted and peeled and now they have kneeled" Good job on this! Its incredible, i love it :)