Aww, so bitter sweet!
I love it~

It pulled at me a bit more than any other little story would because something like this happened to me as well...

Ya know...girl likes guy, guy likes someone else, girl just has to deal with it. Quite sad.

Ah well. I still loved it. ^_^



~Yuki

Very nicely done. Short and bitter-sweet.

This was so cute! I totally adored it, ^^ The thing I probably like the most is that you didn't use names. Because this situation could happen to anyone. ^^ once again: ADORABLE! >

It was good, I just think you could have used larger paragraphs; some sentences have the same topic and can go together.