Though I am labelled "religious" I don't disagree with your thinking. A person can't make claims without at least trying to have knowledge, but the thing with knowledge is no matter how much you posses there will always be things out of our understanding. That is where you decide to put your faith. Questions aren't the problem, it's the questions that can't be answered no matter who you ask them. Good poem, I like that it encourages contemplation and learning.

Ashelin

Sometimes Ifeel like you only put in a sentance or phrase because you needed to rhyme. Dont be afraid to go freestyle. It was a beautiful work, dont get me wrong, but I would love to see more freestyle out of you.

good job. Very well done