Well this is a really interesting piece- I quite likes it. :) Some favourite moments:
"Once upon a time you were
Black and white and you were killed by the color" A great couple of lines, very poetic and interesting.
"We kick you down until you're smilin' again" Almost seems paradoxical and odd, but because of that it works really well.
Well written and a very engaging little talk of sorts the speaker is having with someone. The "Da-dum"s give the piece a real quirky character that I love. Bravo!

very beautiful! I loved it. Is there a tune for it?

Oh, that's so beautifully sad. Is there a tune to go along with it?
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