 Ashelin 2008-07-17 . chapter 1Interesting. Like one of those dreams you walk away from, longing to know everything about it, all it's dark beauty but at last it finally fades and all you can sense is that feeling. The one that bubbles inside when you remember it, but there are no memories other than darkness that the dream world often brings. Excellent. I really enjoyed this almost gothic-feeling tale. Great job. |
 Koki Enwai 2008-07-17 . chapter 1Ah, romantic. I was at first disappointed that it was so short, but it turned out to be the perfect length! The visuals you gave off were vivid and detailed -- in short, I loved it!
- Koki |