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| uniqueindividual 2008-07-31 ch 1, | abuseThat was pretty funny. In a good way. |
| dolly-dear 2008-07-24 ch 1, | abuseOh. Nice. =} |
| Sunshine 2008-07-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseThe main charcter's name was Ayden. It says in the first sentence. I really liked this actually. It made me laugh there were a few grammer errors but nothing to terrible... Uh yeah. I liked it lots. End of insightful review |
| Bi-curious George 2008-07-17 ch 1, | abuseHahaha... Parts of it were funny, like the way he hated Jeffree at the start of it. But um, I don't quite understand the necessity to mention him wearing eyeliner? It didn't really seem to impact his character at all, and had no bearing on anything much, other than Jeffree asking him if he was gay? Which it seemed like he would have done anyway... And you started an awful lot of sentences with 'I', 'He' and 'Jeffree'. Just a small thing. Otherwise, it was alright ^^. |