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closed.quarters 2009-10-07 . chapter 1
I think this is the ONLY one-shot in my favourites! It's truly truly amazing and I adore it!
Please please please let me know if you're going to do a sequel or something else with the same characters! =D

And thanks for writing this *happy happy happy*
kazoua 2009-10-02 . chapter 1
Wow. Goodness. Woot woot for those boys. What a way to prove you're not gay. Right? Have sex. Hahaha, but yeah. Sex and all is cool but this story was completely and obvious a set up for smutty slashy goodness.
StoicCrying 2008-12-24 . chapter 1
omg, that was funny!

'shush don't ruin the moment."

great story
InvaderFae 2008-12-18 . chapter 1
that was really really good. One-shots make me sad though it feels like the characters are just stuck.like that was Jeffree's last moan. Him and Nameless dude are drifting around in limbo in that position for all of eternity...they have to be getting bored. nameless dudes knees are getting tired...lol seriously though this was great
Iconic 2008-12-02 . chapter 1
Nope, the mane character will be mr. namless forever!
This was fun! I don't usully read oneshot becaue I can't stand to be left with so little informantion, but this was awsome. Totaly random! How can you go from hating someone the having sex in like one second flat?!? lol Great story, your writting rocks!
T. J. Walters 2008-11-18 . chapter 1
You named him Ayden.:)
Confetti Kitty 2008-10-29 . chapter 1
The title is genious :D I love it.
mangazan 2008-10-05 . chapter 1
Wow, this is really good. I loved it when Jeffree whispered, "I think I love you." Aw... ^^
uniqueindividual 2008-07-31 . chapter 1
That was pretty funny. In a good way.
dolly-dear 2008-07-24 . chapter 1
Oh. Nice. =}
Sunshine 2008-07-20 . chapter 1
The main charcter's name was Ayden. It says in the first sentence.
I really liked this actually.
It made me laugh there were a few grammer errors but nothing to terrible...
Uh yeah.
I liked it lots.
End of insightful review
Kneecap 2008-07-17 . chapter 1
Hahaha...
Parts of it were funny, like the way he hated Jeffree at the start of it.
But um, I don't quite understand the necessity to mention him wearing eyeliner? It didn't really seem to impact his character at all, and had no bearing on anything much, other than Jeffree asking him if he was gay? Which it seemed like he would have done anyway...
And you started an awful lot of sentences with 'I', 'He' and 'Jeffree'. Just a small thing.
Otherwise, it was alright ^^.
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