HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA!
oh-my-freaking-GOD I can't stop laughing! How do you come up with this stuff? It's so hilarious and random and geez I can picture it happening XD excellent, really. Another?

haha, cute. and very amusing :) i liked it.

ahaha. this is soo cute. xd

LOL! That is awesome. I love the ending.

That was hilarious! Especially the ending with Tex. Ha, I love it! =]

awesome!! Such a cool guy, I wish I could know him. you know, if he was real...

Heheh. I love it.

this was such a good one shot good job

This was really cute!

I liked it :) I think it could work out as a more lengthier story but oh wells :P Anyway, kudos to you bub

The first line was a bit jumbled...
And the tenses kind of switched around quite a bit, but most particularly around the part that started with "The dance was quick."

I also wonder how Brad managed to hold so closely to him, and get touchy feely during the dance, but not realise that he'd gotten more than he bargained for?

And I kind of cringed at the mention of "'member'". It's oral sex, it's a pretty graphic act, and it didn't seem like an overly romantic gesture, but more of a lust-thing. So why use a euphemism? Meh, that's just my opinion.

Otherwise, I liked the character's personality, and I found myself (somehow) not disbelieving that an 18 year old boy could successfully pass as a girl up close. I'm not sure why.

As oneshots come and go? It was quite good :D.

I liked this, the ending line made me smile.