yo. im finally leaving a comment..and ima say what i already told ya.

Its a good poem, if thats what u believe.

ur a good writer, keep it coming!

"Fearless leaders make us slave"...slaves

Not a big fan of the bolding of us, it just seemed odd, especially since it's only in that one stanza, not the others.

I do like your piece because it makes a really great point and is definitely something people can relate to.

PS If you're bored check out the Review Game and/or it's Review Marathon (links in my profile).