it's interesting

Okay, rather random but...that physical description of Chelsea...that's me to the dot. 5'6, dark blonde hair and green eyes. Kinda creepy cool? And the fact that my middle name is Chelsea...um...I've only read this chapter so far, but hopefully this isn't some type of predestinated thing going on...haha.

I read Allison Wonderland twice, accidentally. I was into the third chapter when I started to get a deja vu feeling, but I ignored it because you get that on fictionpress a lot, you know? But then during the fifth chapter, I was all 'oh **, I've read this treasure already. Damnit.' So then I went to go check out your other stories, since Allison Wonderland basically opened up a whole new level for romance genre in ficpress. A very honest brave voice that made you cringe while you read yet somehow relate. Hopefully I'll find that aspect in this one as well? (well maybe not the angst, hopefully? considering the strange connections between the character and I, haha)

alright, I don't like Brendan that much right now, but I did get more compassion for him in the last few lines of the chapter.

kay, onto the next!

Okay, so you have to update this because its really good. and i like what i have read so far. So hurry up and update it soon, please? it's really good. i think i'm gonna love it just as much as i love Allison Wonderland...so update soon.

i never saw it coming that was such an unexpected twist but i love it...throw some more my way i'm positive that no matter what that may be i'm gonna love it...but i really dnt get brendan at all...

I really like where this story is going so far. Keep it up and update soon!
Faith

Great start! I can't wait to read chapter two (when I have more time T_T) I love your stuff.

Good luck on Allison Wonderland

Elizabeth Arlen

Love your story, it grabbed my attention in the first chapter. Love it

I love this!

update soon please. It seems really interesting.

Woah!

Nice :) this just keeps getting better and better!

It gets slightly confusing, but that seems to be the point. The character is in a state of utter confusion, and we are following her close behind. I think I might have a small idea of what is going on here, but who knows, you just keep throwing us curve balls. I am interesting in what comes next.

Continue this! This is amazing! Good luck with Allison Wonderland! I hope it gets published! I'm a huge fan of that story! So romantic and dramatic!

This story is good and its going right on my favorite and story alert lists!

I love the incounter between Brendan and Chelsea. ^_^ A bit short but twas good :)

This is really good so far, and I would love if you updated.

Loving this so far. I hope you update soon. =)

Looks great so far. Good luck with Alison!