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| RockMusicFreak 2008-07-22 ch 1,  | abuseNeeds a little bit more closure. |
| Midge-The-Hopeless-Romantic 2008-07-21 ch 1, | abuselovely |
| White Rose Blossom 2008-07-20 ch 1, | abuseAww, I liked this one. It was really well written and I loved how easy it was to "slip inside" the main characters mind because of the way you described it. Also, it was pretty cool reading it with "you" instead of "he" or "him" or whatever it would be. The ending was perfect too. Great job (as usual ^_^) -Aria |
| ParaKisu21 2008-07-19 ch 1, | abuseVery nicely done. But I kinda want some closure or something more fair for her. Still, its nice this way too. |