| Reviews for The Carnations |
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blurrylights 3/8/09 . chapter 1I liked this! I wish she actually had confronted him, but this was interesting. I wish there was more of an ending for her, but this was very well written as is. Great job! |
butterfliesandponies 10/18/08 . chapter 1 Poor wife! Her husband's an EVIL, CRAPPY, BS AND JERK |
E.Maginitive 10/13/08 . chapter 1Urg. Wish you'd continue this but that's probably not going to happen so...nice story. Well, er, not really 'nice' but well-written. -_-' |
notwithoutyou 9/27/08 . chapter 1It was nice, but it would be better with some closure. |
RockMusicFreak 7/22/08 . chapter 1Needs a little bit more closure. |
Midge-The-Hopeless-Romantic 7/21/08 . chapter 1lovely |
White Rose Blossom 7/20/08 . chapter 1Aww, I liked this one. It was really well written and I loved how easy it was to "slip inside" the main characters mind because of the way you described it. Also, it was pretty cool reading it with "you" instead of "he" or "him" or whatever it would be. The ending was perfect too. Great job (as usual _) -Aria |
ParaKisu21 7/19/08 . chapter 1Very nicely done. But I kinda want some closure or something more fair for her. Still, its nice this way too. |