 Super.Secret.Music.Mission. 2009-03-08 . chapter 1I liked this! I wish she actually had confronted him, but this was interesting. I wish there was more of an ending for her, but this was very well written as is. Great job! |
 butterflies_and_ponies 2008-10-18 . chapter 1 Poor wife! Her husband's an EVIL, CRAPPY, BS AND JERK |
 E.Maginitive 2008-10-13 . chapter 1Urg. Wish you'd continue this but that's probably not going to happen so...nice story. Well, er, not really 'nice' but well-written.
-_-' |
 notwithoutyou 2008-09-27 . chapter 1It was nice, but it would be better with some closure. |
 RockMusicFreak 2008-07-22 . chapter 1Needs a little bit more closure. |
 Midge-The-Hopeless-Romantic 2008-07-21 . chapter 1lovely |
 White Rose Blossom 2008-07-20 . chapter 1Aww, I liked this one. It was really well written and I loved how easy it was to "slip inside" the main characters mind because of the way you described it. Also, it was pretty cool reading it with "you" instead of "he" or "him" or whatever it would be. The ending was perfect too.
Great job (as usual ^_^)
-Aria |
 ParaKisu21 2008-07-19 . chapter 1Very nicely done. But I kinda want some closure or something more fair for her. Still, its nice this way too. |