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Reviews For: The Carnations

RockMusicFreak
2008-07-22
ch 1,
abuseNeeds a little bit more closure.
Midge-The-Hopeless-Romantic
2008-07-21
ch 1,
abuselovely
White Rose Blossom
2008-07-20
ch 1,
abuseAww, I liked this one. It was really well written and I loved how easy it was to "slip inside" the main characters mind because of the way you described it. Also, it was pretty cool reading it with "you" instead of "he" or "him" or whatever it would be. The ending was perfect too.
Great job (as usual ^_^)
-Aria
ParaKisu21
2008-07-19
ch 1,
abuseVery nicely done. But I kinda want some closure or something more fair for her. Still, its nice this way too.
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