I really liked this. It had an honest, conversational tone to it that I liked... if that makes sense. I liked the build up and effect of the last line. T'was nicely done. One thing though, I didn't understand the last line of the 2nd stanza... Anyways, keep up the good work.

- Silence, courtesy of The Roadhouse (link in my profile).

great job on this. I really like it! : )