omg this is so good, please continue :)

LOVED IT.
problem... HOW THE ... CAN YOU LEAVE ME HANGING AT THIS POINT??
thought it was really good, and you're the first story I've reviewed on this accout (hem hem, feel honouredd).
adding this to my watch list, def trills.
you'd put RL Stine outta business, no problem!

Is it so wrong that I though up of a few comical lines while reading this chapter?

Kind of reminds me of Donnie Darko, because of the whole "bunny" thing.

-Nichole

So, is Brandon gay? lol

Great chapter! Can't wait to read more. You're a talented writer.

Hmm, the end sounds like Angelique has schitziofrenia (sp) near the end...

Bit, slow but no great book or movie every started out with a bang. This makes me want to watch "Silence of the Lambs" and "Hannibal Rising" again to get some ideas...

Oh...I loved this first chapter/prologue. It really leaved me craving for more, however sickening. I can tell a great psycho character is going to emerge from this...that should be more than fun to craft. I love the concept of Bunny and the attachment of child to animal, however I'm not sure about the title. It's good, but it feels like the story needs a little more spice...idk. Great job. Keep writing!
-Decoris-

OK.

This should, WITHOUT QUESTION, be an M rating. It's well written and overall a creepy (and very disturbing) tale, I just think that a T rating is far too lenient. The violence isn't a massive problem, but the opening scene is very distressing simply because of what is happening and is definitely not for anyone without maturity or quite a strong stomach. Although, I suppose that sort of 'horrified reading' was what you were aiming for, right? ;)

Pretty decent little story, just bump up the rating.

You know some people are gonna ** and moan about one of the murders. So that might change espically with the content that's in it. XD

OKAY, that was... interesting. But overall it was very well written despite being a little disturbing. Seeing as there was no real dialogue in the story it's hard to imagine how the 'bunny' talked but I sort of pictured a stuffed bunny whispering evil things into the girl's head. Good job though and keep on writing.