Hi there!
It is 4 am right now... and I started reading this story yesterday! But finally, I'm done and I enjoyed every bit of it. 'cuz, even if at first I was a little put off by the lenght... as soon as I started reading I found myself unable to stop. There's hardly any word to describe it - awesome, fantastic, etc - and I really am thankful that you put this up on FictionPress.
If you ever plan on publishing this, I sure as hell will buy.
I hope you'll keep the awesome work up, and thanks a lot (I don't think I could really put in words how thankful I am) again for producing such a wonderful fic.
AranaBanana

Your story is amazing. I stayed up all night just to finish it. Some parts of it are rather cliched, but overall it is very well done. I especially admire the fact that you were able to tie together so many characters without making the plot overly confusing. Your writing style is clear and precise however I do believe you could use the words 'anyhow' and 'anyways' a little less. Well done and keep writing (:

I honestly think I'm in shock..
Bloody hell, this was amazing.

I finally ventured into fantasy stories, to see what was there, and this was one of the first I stumbled across.
and I'm glad I did.

Its epic.

There's one or two grammatical errors, but who really cares.
I think what I enjoyed the most was that you created this entire world, and you filled in nearly all the blanks.
It took me just over a day to read the entire story because I couldn't stop.

You are awesome :D
And you should publish this too.
I know I would definately buy it.

Keep up the amazing work =D

eugh. casandria. bah.

NONONONO! IT'S NOT FUN THAT WAY! D=
aww...Kevran... :>:>:> you like her! =)) who the hell am i talking to? =))

Yes I am positive I hate Matt. or just realy dislike.
i hope their plan goes well.
and i hope she snaps out of her shock or wtvr. =))

...i don't really like Matt. :|

OH AHAHAHA. THIS WAS AWESOME.
but...KEVRAN!! =D but Jer's fun. AHAHAHA.

ROFLMAO. i didn't expect that to happen. =))
BUT YEY!
cuz...i don't want jer and caedra. *shudder*
please don't make them end up together.
but...the story already ended...so...=)) i'll just have to wait and find out.

I really like your story, and i think its going along great, great job!

...yes i am confused.
please. don't make her go with Jer. i mean...he does seem nice and all...BUT KEVRAN! KEVRAN! THEIR EYES MET BEFORE AVERANCE ASKED HER TO DANCE AND OHMYGOD IT MADE ME SWOON!
i don't know why I get super emotionally intense when i love pairings..but...NONONO NOT JER!
i bet i wouldn't really like the dancing part in the next chapter. :|

*screams and dances around*
YESYESYES! A KEVRAN AND CAEDRA DEVELOPMENT!
WOO BABY! \m/
=))
** you aldric. ** you casandria! :)

...I think...Fayden might be with the Thieves Guild...
...or that it was Kevran's father...?
BECAUSE I DON'T WANT TO THINK THAT KEVRAN WOULD DO IT. :|

:O NO FAYDEN SHOULDN'T DIE! :(
...no. nonono.
I don't want Caedra with Jer. >:P EW. and after what Kevran said about 'him only wanting one thing', then WHOA NO WAY. =))
KEVRAN FTW!

=S
kinda weird tho for Quisa to be like that. anyway...i'm sure there's gonna be an explanation for that.
OH DEAR GOD WHAT HAPPENED TO FAYDEN?! i like him! =))