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| Alecha Seaa 2008-08-12 ch 1,  | abuseI guess we do in our minds :) I like the procedure, rather eyeopening. I understand State C, but that's just reality. Though, we can make it all different in imagination & art. like fantasy, and stories. |
| foxtrot 2008-07-21 ch 1, | abusestate B is an impossibility. cuz it has dancing unicorns in it. :) well, that was unique... :) :D XD |
| simpleplan13 2008-07-19 ch 1, | abuseI really like the format of this. How you turn it into a process and name each of them, it really works to help ppl picture the situation you want. The only thing is I might make the second one a picture as well. Like "Picture state A, but introduce what you choose" just to keep the consistency. What I really loved were the questions, they are definitely something that we should ask ourselves and work on finding the answers too. A really great piece that makes you think. PS If your bored check out the Review Game and/or it's Review Marathon (link in my profile). |