I like this chapter a lot better than the first one, haha. Drake's amusing, and I think you really toned down his sensitive side/explained it a bit more, so that made it a lot better. I like his best friend too. Ryan seems like your typical guy.

Cute start! Drake seems way too sensitive for a boy, though...at first I thought he was gay, haha. It's hard writing guys (I should know), but I doubt a guy would blast Boys Like Girls after a breakup, no matter how funny.

Callie and Rose seem like very believable characters, though! Can't wait to read what happens!

Haha. Thanks for clearing up that Drake isn't gay. I was getting confused there for a minute. . .

Anyway, good chapter. I like the backstory offered here.

- Koki

Stories with twins are definitely intriguing. I like the set-up so far, but there really isn't much to comment on yet.

Is Drake, like, er, gay? I mean, that's just the impression of him that I got, but maybe he's just a sensitive kind of guy. . .

Callie's pretty cool so far. I look forward to reading more!

- Koki

hello! First of all, I'm curious as to how your story will develop. However, when I read the first part of the story, I thought that maybe the twin was gay or really sensitive. I don't know if that's how you intend for him to be.. Anyway, I look forward to reading the rest of your chapters as it come out!

-Tess