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| Dot Cubed 2008-07-21 ch 2,  | abuseI like this chapter a lot better than the first one, haha. Drake's amusing, and I think you really toned down his sensitive side/explained it a bit more, so that made it a lot better. I like his best friend too. Ryan seems like your typical guy. |
| Dot Cubed 2008-07-21 ch 1, | abuseCute start! Drake seems way too sensitive for a boy, though...at first I thought he was gay, haha. It's hard writing guys (I should know), but I doubt a guy would blast Boys Like Girls after a breakup, no matter how funny. Callie and Rose seem like very believable characters, though! Can't wait to read what happens! |
| Koki Enwai 2008-07-21 ch 2, | abuseHaha. Thanks for clearing up that Drake isn't gay. I was getting confused there for a minute. . . Anyway, good chapter. I like the backstory offered here. - Koki |
| Koki Enwai 2008-07-19 ch 1, | abuseStories with twins are definitely intriguing. I like the set-up so far, but there really isn't much to comment on yet. Is Drake, like, er, gay? I mean, that's just the impression of him that I got, but maybe he's just a sensitive kind of guy. . . Callie's pretty cool so far. I look forward to reading more! - Koki |
| Tess Reynolds 2008-07-19 ch 1, | abusehello! First of all, I'm curious as to how your story will develop. However, when I read the first part of the story, I thought that maybe the twin was gay or really sensitive. I don't know if that's how you intend for him to be.. Anyway, I look forward to reading the rest of your chapters as it come out! -Tess |