lol, i can definitely relate to this! and im sure loads of other people can relate too. i especially love the emboldened lines. its so true tho! in my case, im talking about several crushes where i was completely besotted, and the guys in question never realised that 'they only had to say the word'!

i look back now and cringe, lol.

great work Vicky ;)

~mez~

Wow. I haven't logged in here in a long time. The title from the e-mail alert made me want to check it out. I can really relate to this work. I love it. XD

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I liked the premise, because usually I see things that take place during and after a relationship, so seeing something from another angle was a nice change. I also liked "When I was waiting on a dream/That could never come true" because I feel like that pretty much all the time. You were right - this is something that a lot of people can relate to! Nicely done =)

I like the ending. Easy to relate to which is a good thing and I also like how you format this with bold and italics.