Review Marathon! (-points to link in profile-)

I'm not sure about the premise. I've seen the whole pretending to be together thing before, and then they're going to end up together in the end, because that's how it always happens.

This whole thing was also pretty much dialogue, which is confusing and a little boring. We have no reason to like these characters, since all they do is talk. You need to flesh it out with description and such, so we have a better idea of the setting and all of that. Dialogue doesn't really tell us enough.