update please =D

Lovee it =)

naww i never read this chapter. very excited to see what happens next!

'Have you ever appreciated a man’s back? I mean, really? Because it is a glorious thing.'
I loved that line, it is so true. I'm glad you could fit that in there, not alot of people mention that part of a man.

I ,holy cow, love your story!
Update soon

Hey -

I've read a lot of your work but I hadn't noticed this one. I love it! At first, I was a little shocked that they hooked up in the first chapter but now I realize that their relationship was complex beforehand. I think a prologue might help take the edge off but the chapters that follow certainly help.

I can't wait to see what happens next!

Katie

Wow, cliff hanger than not post for a month! come on lady!

I was listening to Nice Guys Finish Last by Cobra Starship & one part reminded me of this
"Listen kid you hear those sirens coming for me.
But when I get downtown she will already be
Posting bail in her favorite dress
Smiling at me because I'm no good"

ahh i'm loving this!! you need to post more before i die of wanting to know what happens next!!

I think I love your stories more than I love anyone's. They're not cliche, they seem more real. And I love this one! When are you going to update? Please tell me soon. DON'T LEAVE ME HANGIN'.

It's amazing and humorous. And I hope to GOD that Rayna isn't pregnant.

This chapter was funny. Ha, with the Frank's monopoly business to Rayna's grandmother's pride of this crazy night, it was just...so funny.

I like Brady so much. And Josh is awkward, which is funny. And I like Kid too. But i seriously love Brady.

Oh, and a few chapter ago, it's almost made me cry. Brady doesn't think that they can work out. It's sad. Ugh, so many emotions. It's so much in one day it makes me feel dirty.

update soon.
love.

She is 7 kinds of stupid. And dense.
ANYWAY.
I'm liking this story so far.
Brady is again, just the right kind of boy that makes your heart race and your vision see red :))

I love your leading men. They're all so beautifully flawed.
Can't wait to read the next chapters!
Update soon!!

This is...interesting. In a good way haha. I hope this whole mystery brouhaha is going to be revealed soon :D

I love ur storey its awesome, i was upset when i got to the end because i wanted to write more. So write more! xx

OMG! So amazing. Just spent like 2 hours reading your story. Please post the rest of it. I just had totally sadness overcome me when I saw that the arrow for the next chapter wasn't at the bottom of my page. Love your story. I feel like crazy connection to Rayna. We have a lot in common and I have someone similar to Brady in my life. Although I doubt I'll get a car scene, it would make my life. Please don't mkae Rayna pregnant I don't think I'll be able to handle the stress, but you're in charge not me, but please write more. If for no other reason that my sanity. I want to know what happens next!