After like a day and a half, reading this and i mean over 24 hours, I can safely say this is one of my favorites stories so far. It was well written with a good plot, but I would appreciate it if you had put up some translations ^^;; I don't understand a word of German so it sort of put me off a bit ^^;

im happy/sorry to say this story had recently ruined reading for me. lol. it was so awesome that every time i try to start a new story its just not even scratching the surface of good enough. i absolutely love this story to much. the layers are amazing and detailed, and there are just so many of them all equally awe-inspiring, i am very very impressed. it was a very well written book. im honored to be able to read it.

When he's first thinking of Alyai and her living in the house, your sentences are a bit confusing. The last part was SO funny. I love Mica. At the end, when his temperature's 99.1, the normal one's 98.6, so he wasn't even one whole degree off. He was half a degree higher than healthy.

Was he raped? If he was, You're a **. If he was not, You're still a ** for making it seem like that. Fantastic story through. You should make the sequal, like... a bunch One-Shots, yeah, that'd be nice.

Hey! My name is Felicity, Cool!! Love your story, confusing as hell, but very very good.

aweesome story!! i love it. :)

This is your best piece of work. I am completely and totally in love with it. Talm and Ilan are great and I think you characterized them really well. The plot was very unique and I think you paced it well enough. I really want to read more, but I looked at those lyrics and they look really angsty, so I'm guessing ypu plan for them to get separated? LOL, I only want fluff or minor angst for this couple. ^^; I know, over-sentimental, right? But they went through so much. Anyway, I just wanted to review and tell you all that.

The only thing that needs ConCrit, I think, is the grammar/punctuation/etc. I hope you don't get offended, because that really isn't my intention, but you should *really* consider getting a beta. The story became really good, so I didn't mind so much, but a lot of readers will immediately write it off if they just notice the errors and think it overrides the plot. Also, evey chapter really made sense to me except the epilogue, but maybe that's just me. I just thought the part where he almost got raped was a little sudden, unless it's sort of a prequel to your sequel. Other than that, it's rather pointless. You could have just described what was up with them (you know, community college, work, Juliard) and maybe have said that the only time they fought was over Ilan's safety. I don't think you needed to bring up the drugged-rape, as it has to relevance to the plot. Of course, if you *are* setting up the sequel using that fight, then I apologize.

Other than that, this was an amazing story. I've only read this and RWIHT, but I think this is your best piece of work. ^^ I hope to see more greatness from you in the future. Wooh, Ilan and Talm! Seriously, I want my own hot German now. =_=

DAMN that's cute!

Not that I don't think this story is great or anything, but your first version sounds interesting, and I kind of wish you had wrote it that way, just so I could find out what it would have been like. Just my opinion, but tradgedies are at times better than 'hopeful' stories. Obviously, you think different, but I'm still glad that you wrote it happier. I don't want to cry tonight xD

good god woman! my heart beat straight out of my chest as i read this. love your story! :D

You have absoultely no idea how in love with this story I am! The characters and plot make me smile and I especially like felicity. Talm (I've warmed up to he name) is adorable, sexy, sweet, and more.

Now THAT is a lime scene! I love this story!

Kidnapped by a Nazi. XD I applaud you for your originality. Is there some sort of time gap in his backyard? well I guess I will find out if I keep reading. I love it.

Three words: Oh. My. God. I LOVED this story so much. I even cried a few times. I could see this as a really cool film or TV series :3 Anyway, good job!!

Hmm why can't Ilan stay in Talm's time? I think it's selfish that he expects Talm to go into his time when he won't even consider staying in the past. This stories awesome by the way :)

~Fatty