You had to stop there?!?!!?!

I like the beginning of this story... i think you should roll with it and see where it goes. I'm interested in finding out the "organisation" they are talking about. :)

wow, a little dark, scary, and, yes, confusing but good, very good. good luck with it

Hm...very interesting premise. It definitely left me wanting to know more about the who, what, why, where, and when of this world. An imposter of a king? A criminal for good? A harsh, vengeful woman with a talent for killing? Yep, I'd love to see this continued after Fear and Blood, so keep writing.

I liked it. I hope I can read more soon. ^^

WOW!

I want the rest of the story. You definately to post the whole story. You have no choice.

~Dragon

again, a story of pure awesomeness. =D please write more but finish fear & blood first please!

excellent! plse continue?:) But i'd like you to continue your other story 1st.

Nice start. I think you should definitely continue it. Talon seems like a cool character so far. There were a couple typos, also.

Looking forward to more!

- Koki