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| concerto49 2008-08-05 ch 1,  | abuseWow, feels a bit scary. You did make it sound real, which was good. I was almost about to ask if it really happened to you. Possibly a bit wordy and all at times, but it's alright. Hm, perhaps it drags on a times about something else, but the revenge parts were good. It feels like a mental struggle :) |
| Eilinora 2008-07-22 ch 1, | abuseIt's the "meaning of life"? Well, let me tell you, you're one of millions of people who think they've found the "meaning of life", each of whom think they're the first one to think it's just "to survive". And you're not original for writing mediocre angstfic about it, either. And I'll answer your question: You posted it because your ego is hungry and you wanted reviews to verify your sad, sad existence. Am I right? |