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| tearstainedcheeks 2008-08-27 ch 3,  | abuseWHY DO YOU DO THIS TO ME! you always stop at the most...exciting parts. i want to know what happens next. =( |
| WithoutException 2008-08-21 ch 3, | abuse-Gasp- Cliffhanger! I hate cliffhangers. But this story is really good. I like the dialogue and description, and Adam's comments on her list are too funny. Can't wait to hear more! |
| chelsea can fly 2008-08-14 ch 3, | abuseupdate update update! right now. haha, i like this alot. |
| MCakaWriterGirl 2008-07-21 ch 3, | abuseomg is he okay is mitch dead come on update the suspense is killing me. lol |
| WriterGurl123 2008-07-21 ch 3, | abuseOh no! Oh wow! One minute she's reading the list with his name on it a million times and rolling her eyes at his stupidness and the next she finds out that his sister and her brother are in a car accident. I just hope that things are okay. Love it! |
| MCakaWriterGirl 2008-07-20 ch 2, | abusewow is she goingt o end up with adam i mean it seems like that to me. love it keep on updating. |
| MCakaWriterGirl 2008-07-20 ch 1, | abusegreat story and is she pregnant. i really do like it. |
| Ella K. 2008-07-20 ch 2, | abuseThis is a really good story, and I've enjoyed reading what's been posted so far. I really like Jonathan and Adam, and I think it's hilarious that since Amber's mom can't cook, Amber has to order pizza all the time. Strangely enough, my friend is like that, but she doesn't know all the people by name at Pizza Hut, sadly. :P Anyway, the end of this chapter was pretty funny. Adam just had to cross off Jonathan, ponies, the rainbow and put himself as Amber's favorite place. Haha, Amber's obviously not so pleased with all of that. I can't wait for an update. This story's really interesting. (: -Ella |
| Holiday in Spain 2008-07-20 ch 2, | abuseI love it. You do a good job at showing the history, the school life, and the home life. It's very cool. ^^ |
| xxLovelyLittleLie 2008-07-20 ch 1, | abusehaha, I love this story. *50 thumbs up* If people dont review, I'll hog-tie them to a tree and beat their face in with a gnome. kthxilybai. |