Kudos on another cool chapter.

Bob save the queen. Well done old boy and I hope the next chapter comes along swimmingly. Kdh.

Interesting. This story reminds me of an anime I used to like. Can't think of what it's called, though. I like the way you use description. It's your strongest point in writing. The scene where Lexa fights the vampire especially stands out.

I didn't but I should have seen the elemental powers coming. Another fun chapter, agent. Well done. Kdh.

P.S. Thanks for the reviews old boy.

Good chapter man, "Magi of Hellfire" is a cool title. One thing though why not call the Southern States The Confederate States.

Nicely done old boy, did not expect the English part. Nice twist. Kdh.

Good chapter I look forward to what comes next.

I love the sound of this one! The U.S defanitly needs to quit oil cold turkey before something like this happens. Great stuff with the potential for greatness.

Not bad, a bit different for you but not in a bad way. In a good way. I would think that steam and coal would be put back into use, how do you think they fought the civil war? Kinda has a steampunk vibe to it. Kdh.

This is a very well thought out and executed visual of the not so distant future. It makes one think, "Just what would happen if we ran out of our precious black gold?"

I can't wait for the next chapter, I can imagine the rest of the story will be just as well executed as the prologue.

Hello.
This is an interesting beginning. I would love to see where this is going.

Well, there was one sentence that needs some tweaking;

The population steadily declined most of the obese

Shouldn't it be
The population steadily declined as most of the ..

etc.

Well, so far, I think it's a really good job. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. :D