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Ekko Rein 2009-10-11 . chapter 5
this is bad!
CharismaAlexis7432 2009-10-05 . chapter 5
I love your story, and I can NOT wait 4 the next update. Even though I love this story, I can't help but still dislike Garrett. P.S. Will is way better, 2 me anyways, I love his character, and the way he reacts to things, he kind of deep, so to speak, well anyways love the story,keep up the good work
TiggerGurl 2009-07-28 . chapter 5
OMG! NO NO NO! xD I really liked the story but please! dont make Them end up together v.v Please i beg you =/ Make Will do something!!
groovi-gal-numba1 2009-07-25 . chapter 5
O__O wow!

ok that was DEFINETLY the best chapter! the first four chapters were ok but chapter 5 just put GIR onto my fav story list! :D

I like how you are actually avoiding the cliches. Nobody saw garret coming at the beginning. will was the first guy she met, therefore will is who she ends up with. i love that you're avoiding that. it actually reminds me heaps of that other story that you were gonna write some day, that we talked about heaps like 2 years ago O__O

but yes i'd love to hear your plans for this!

xoxoxoxoxox

ps - yay i finially finished gir so far! you proud?
groovi-gal-numba1 2009-07-25 . chapter 4
lol like at the end of every chapter you have a full on philisophical talk about some sort of idea.

oh garrets gona cause trouble!

:D xoxox
groovi-gal-numba1 2009-07-25 . chapter 3
yay chapter 3.
i gots some ideas for activities!
horse riding
dance competition - because most activities so far have been for the boys its now time for one with the girls!! (it would be halarious to watch garrott try that)
Obsticale course
abseiling
talent show!

um yeah thats all i got so far O__O
whats this about a worrying pm from Bella?

lovely chapter
xoxox
groovi-gal-numba1 2009-07-25 . chapter 2
lalalalala yay chapter two. i'm on a roll here. i'll probably read every chapter.

It was a fun chapter. little bram was cute, i loved that she beat garrett.

but i do have a little problem - i have no idea what any of the characters look like O__O
i think you said somewhere in here that isabel is blonde - and was like, wait what? coz i'd imagined her with brown hair. but yeah i think more character descriptions are nececary.

but other than that i love it :D yay

xoxoxox

ps- i love how you said in your a/n that there is more demand for tig... which is now gone... *tear*
groovi-gal-numba1 2009-07-25 . chapter 1
hey i got bored from working so i decided to read GIR! thats its new nickname. like tig but gir. :D

i liked this chapter. the whole summer camp scene is really interesting.

Isabel seems like an interesting character :) me likey will too. garret seems like he'll provide a few laughs. um why did you name the yellow team leader after mara wilson? famous child actor of the 90's. or was it an accident?

ON TO CHAPTER TWO!
ithinkyourgay 2009-07-25 . chapter 5
heyy,
i like this story and the idea of the camp. but so far in the story is she falling for garrett or will? im confused.
nevershoutrachel 2009-07-24 . chapter 5
this is a nice little story.
I like how it's going so far.
Sapphyre Nymph 2009-07-19 . chapter 5
what a twist! wow...
JoiZ. D 2009-07-19 . chapter 5
Hey! You're back! I'm really sorry for reviewing SO late!! I've been restricted from the computer so, this will be short as I'm not supposed to use the PC and I have a time limit.

I'm just really happy that you're writing again! And this chapter was... weird. No offence, but Isabel and Garrett? Gulp, hopefully it won't last, and that Will will sort of like butt in. Hehehe...


But hey, where's the fun if everything proceeds smoothly? (grin) Anyways, glad to have you back. Good job!
ethereal.dance. 2009-07-19 . chapter 5
ZOMGZOMGZOMG!
Ugh, I hate you so much right now! Update Kels! Don't leave me hanging like this! At least tell me what's gonna happen if you're not gonna be updating for who knows how long! I need to know what happens! Ughughugh.

Love you!
xx Joy
Irish Eyes 63 2009-07-10 . chapter 5
Holy **. No ** way. That was not supposed to happen! Lovin' the story plot and everything and the unexpected turns! Fabulous and I can't wait till you update. I'm so sad though, Garrett is a priceless tool and Isabel is a masterpiece, jealous, I think so.
Zippy 2009-07-06 . chapter 5
Yeah, I was getting a little confused about the going home for Christmas over summer thing. Lol. Another good chapter, but...why the hell did she agree to Garrett-the-**'s proposition? Ew. Yeah, okay, so she liked the kiss, but Will is soo much better! Thanks for a great chapter though! =D =D
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