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| Corina 2008-08-09 ch 5, anon. | abusehehhe :P it was great...loved the ending,t'was funny ^^ :) keep up the great work |
| OhWaitIDon'tHaveANickname 2008-07-26 ch 4, anon. | abuseOMGomgOMG (okay...>> this omg-ing is getting annoying) BUT OMFG! *blushes* hahaha I DIDN'T KNOW YOU WERE GONNA USE MY NAME!! that chapter was fucking epic. *another omg* :D seriously,wow. it was awesome ^^ yes,it did cheer me up =p |
| WhatWasMyNicknameAgain?? 2008-07-26 ch 3, anon. | abuseo another chapter =D hm... *professional comment* Dear Sheldon. I'd like to announce you that i really enjoy reading your stories.I need to say that I feel that you're very talented,and that I love your style of writing,like how you used the words in that sentence "she played them across the tip of his manhood." etc heehe did i sound like i knew what i was talking about?? *Corina's comment* OMFG i love it ^^ the main characters must have had so much fun...>> lol |
| Faith Adeline 2008-07-20 ch 2,  | abuseYou switched tenses halfway through, which threw me. but, it was good other than that. hopefully the next one is longer. Faith |
| HahYouDidn'tSeeMe! 2008-07-20 ch 2, anon. | abuseWell... OhMyDog it's amazing! honestly,wouldn't be saying that if i didn't mean it ^^ some bits look familiar.. *giggles* great job (: |