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| Unforgettably-Uniquely Me 2008-08-19 ch 1,  | abuseHa! I like the character's thought process. The debate on what to do was very interesting, especially with how the ending played out. This is very good, nice work. |
| Souvenir 2008-07-27 ch 1, | abuseThis is like...wow. It's prose, I know, but your lines are so poetic. I love how calm it is, and the resolution to jump was just great. Captivating. That's it. Right down to the title. :) |
| someone's sideshow 2008-07-20 ch 1, | abuseWow, I really like this piece. I feel as if I can relate to the character. I would have a hard time skinny dipping. But I think it would be a liberating experience. The hesitation is very real, and the imagery is beautiful. Nicely done! |