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| ComatoseCatastrophe 2008-07-21 ch 1,  | abuseamazing! beyond words. it flowed perfectly and went very well altogether. |
| Tytherpol 2008-07-20 ch 1, | abuseamazing. |
| Ashelin 2008-07-20 ch 1, | abuseWell, I suppose such things have to have such endings. I personally find Sundays terrible, though it's probably just the fact that for a while they have generally been the days where the worst things happen to me. So it goes. I liked this poem. The sugary coating helped the reader swallow down the reality. Good job. |
| Creative Jenius 2008-07-20 ch 1, | abuseWow. Magnificent! I love it, for so many reasons. I love that you chose Sunday to be wholesome and good and then admit that any other day you'd go to Hell. I love the random acts of good you commit, because they really are very random, making room for ants and whathaveyou. I like this a lot. |