   bam - you're dead 2009-10-12 . chapter 4I like these all, so far this one in particular. |
 Scarlett Wynter 2008-07-31 . chapter 1I like how you use the parentheses for effect. Nice touch. I liked the way you ended this. |
 a silenced revolution 2008-07-20 . chapter 5love the last two lines. |
| a silenced revolution 2008-07-20 . chapter 4 it rhymes! i love the cadence of the first two lines. |
| a silenced revolution 2008-07-20 . chapter 1 oh thank you ivan/thursday/elliot. really, thank you. you are a nice person, it's true. :) |
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