Fantastic. I love the line "and spread my lips to form an ellipsis." Gorgeous. There are some really stellar lines in this. You are going on my alerts. I need to keep up with writing like this. Keep writing! :)

gorgeous.
your ability to transform thought into poetry is almost songlike, i like this one very much.
no criticism.

--sv

I know the feeling.

"I say as I lie for you / I lay for you" love that part. Reminds me of the way I write.

Beautiful piece.

"I say as I lie for you / I lay for you"... I didn't understand why you had the / there it just didn't seem needed or to make sense.

The rest of it I really liked. The part about the ellipses was a really interesting description. I also liked when you ask the question and say you know the answer, but without telling the reader what the answer was, that was an interesting tactic. The rest of your descriptions were great as well.

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Sad really but well written. My favorite lines were "but when I said that I will never need you/what I meant was that I have never needed you more." Sadening that one could not say what they should have said. Well done