dude, this made my eyes hurt. but in a good way.

awesome story. I love gory things, and this was amazingly well written!

Oh, dude, this story is what I needed :)

Whenever I'm upset, I love to read gore, it always makes me feel tons better.

Anyway, I like this story. I don't have much critisicm, since I am not a total know-it-all big time writer.

It'd be so cool if this were a movie. But (if this doesn't annoy you too much) can you tell me where the little girl is? All these police are coming in and out and they're not arresting her, but taking her casualties away. Well, great story!

Signed, Lucy Burdick

This has to be the most disturbing piece of work I've ever read. It's so disgusting, so utterly sickening; and yet I couldn't make myself stop reading. It was as if I was sucked into the twisted world of this little girl, watching in raw disbelief and repulsion as she tortured her playmates, so sadistic, so gleeful.

By the way, my first two lines were supposed to be compliments =D Thumbs up for being able to evoke that sort of strong emotions in your readers!

Chilled,
sR

very creepy. um... may i ask what brought this on? it's seriously disturbing. really really well written, but disturbing. i think i'll have nightmares about demonic little girls tonight. -shudders-

even so, it was very well written, like i said. good job!
--kyra

Woah. Just, woah.