Good :)

Please check out my other stories.

"they where calling to me"...were
"Forever yearning to be apart of the sea".. a part


I really like the tile, it's very interesting and different. I also like the third and fourth stanza, they were really pretty and well done, especially the simile about being a child. The rest was nice as well, but that was my favorite part.

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A beautiful poem with tons of amazing imagery. (I've felt that envy, too.)Great stuff!~Songbird