 RockHardCookie 2009-01-28 . chapter 12Wow, this story's really good. Scares the crap out of me. I guess since you also mentioned that it's inspired by Silent Hill, I keep expecting some freaky creatures to pop out at any moment! Great job! |
 Izumi-no-Junko 2009-01-28 . chapter 12Well, this was certainly worth the wait for this chapter! This chapter makes my skin just crawl with anticipation and suspense. I love how you keep the secret of the town just beyond the reach of the readers, it keeps me coming back for more. This is another well written addition to your fabulous story.
I hope your writers block passes, I'm waiting on the edge of my seat for the rest of this thrilling horror. |
 Lithium of Mercy 2009-01-27 . chapter 12Yes! An update! I won't yell at you for the delay because that would make me a complete hypocrite. I definitely know where you're coming from.
Well, I'm so glad to see more of this story. Excellent work, as always, and I look forwards to seeing more! |
 Firion Kenson 2008-12-15 . chapter 1I like what I'm seeing so far. I can't wait to read the next chapters. (Sorry, but I've got to get ready for work, so this is kinda short!)
P.S. It's your old bud Larcen Tyler. |
 Izumi-no-Junko 2008-08-18 . chapter 11Oh no! Something is up with her legs!
I'm sitting on the egde of my seat waiting for more. I really love this story, it realyl grips my imagination and keeps me wanting more. |
 Lithium of Mercy 2008-08-17 . chapter 11Good work! The black plot is thickening, eh? Keep it up. |
 Izumi-no-Junko 2008-07-28 . chapter 10This story has just captivated me. I started to read it yesterday and just couldn't stop. I think the idea is fantastic and it's keeping me guessing at every turn. Wonderful job. I love way you've mixed her thoughts with the story's dialogue. I can't WAIT for more |
 SecretWhispers 2008-07-26 . chapter 10This story is just so... creepy. In a good way though. It is exactly what I have been looking for in a story. I can't believe there aren't many reviews, this is amazing. Awaiting the update! |
 Lithium of Mercy 2008-07-23 . chapter 10Wow! Eerie and haunting without a single present stereotype. Good work! I'll be eagerly awaiting more.
(Off-topic, I love Silent Hill.) |
 Elantil 2008-07-23 . chapter 10I got chills at the part where she heard voices from the phone.
I liked how this story has the vibe of Silent Hill. Though not quite the same. Silent Hill turned into a nightmare town, and had life. Resonance is just... Dead.
Although it's probably still abit early to make any assumptions, but I'm thinking that the name Resonance bears some sort of significance. I don't quite know how to explain my theory, so I'll just leave it at that.
In any case, I'm not that surprised that this hasn't got much reviews, and it's honestly not because your story is bad, but from reading so many stories on the site, I realised that many truly good stories go unnoticed and unappreciated while stories that are... Not of such a good standard are celebrated. So, don't despair. I'll be waiting for your updates. |
 Nillin 2008-07-22 . chapter 9This story is excellent, and I have no idea why there aren't more reviews. One (now two) reviews simply isn't enough for this little gem, as the previous poster said.
Would I be correct in assuming that this has just a tiny tidbit of influence from the Silent Hill series? I pick up the same vibe (feelings of loneliness, etc.) If not, forgive me, but the story is still fantastic.
Your writing style is unique, I'll give you that. I thought I saw a few mistakes, but upon closer inspection it seemed to be stylized in order to make it flow better (I'm guilty of this a lot, although I'm completely terrible. XD I have way too much style over substance.) I did see a few small errors, but they're easily overlooked, and more of a matter of preference, anyways.
I'm extremely interested to see how the story is going to unfold. I'm already piecing together theories that could explain the situation at hand, but I'm basically coming up blank.
So... Update please? XD I'll eagerly await the next chapter! |
 sRoze 2008-07-22 . chapter 2I admire the protagonist for her guts, and yet worry for her because she seems so.. in denial, so naive about the reality of her situation. If I were her, I would have panicked like, at the 2nd chapter, lol. And yet here she was, still bravely exploring creepy places with no signs of life.
I like the fact that the silence of the town is starting to eat at ME too. That's how effective your words and descriptions are; that I can feel what the character is feeling. You're building up suspense pretty nicely now. It was spooky just reading about the graffiti-filled book she read at the church, the shadow she chased to a deserted house, the experience she had at the store.
This is, like I've said, a true gem, hidden amidst the milder tales of horror in FictionPress archive. Glad I uncovered it.
Awaiting your next update,
sR |
 sRoze 2008-07-21 . chapter 49 chapters, and not a single review. I'm very, very surprised, as this horror story is one of the rarer tales that could genuinely ignite a certain sort of uneasiness in its readers.
I have to leave the comforts of the computer right now. But rest assured, I'll definitely be back to finish off the remaining chapters.
In the meantime, please don't feel disheartened that "Resonance" has not received any reviews. I'm really quite surprised! Bewildered actually. This story is such a rare gem. =)
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