This is wonderful! Don't change anything! I seriously enjoyed this! DLjf;alksd :D

That was absolutely, positively hot, intense, extreme, amazing, tearful, heart-quenching, surprising, happy, and so much more all balled up into a story...I five you 10 out of 5 for that. *claps*

Wow. Just brilliant!

This was extremly good and the ending made me laugh! I loved the characters and your writing style!

;3

-TMTMFD

interesting

This was a really great and I loved the super sweet ending. great job :)

I really thought that was excellent. You really know how to capture little moments and details and make them highlights in your stories. I've read some of your other works and I really think you're an excellent writer :) Great work

I didn't think the bondage was too much lol. I like that he did take the few seconds to make sure she was okay during and after. It made the whole romance aspect stand out more than just the simple sexiness of it. Well done.

One of the best kinky stories on FP. I love it, I've read it a couple times now. 3

Yep, liked it. And now the word 'flogger' is making me laugh. Thank you oh so much for that.*Sarcasm* hehehehe flogger hehehehehe

Haha, wow, I'm not into SM or vulgarities but this was cool. I've also read a few BDSM stories before but this have to be the best, and probably the only I've ever reviewed.

Their love was what really touched me. Of all other stories it's always been lust. You did a great job on the emotions. And I like the way they were portrayed as normal people who are just a tad more kinky. Hehe. Which was why I especially love the ending.

wow this was great the only critisism i have is that i don't think you can really love someone if you call them names like that. i just can't imagine someone who loves you saying htose things. it was hot though!

Wow. this is...so great. I loved it. very hot..

m hawt.

need i say more?

wow... so hot and steamy..

I'm glad this didn't turn out to be only a sex scene story. I like the ending a lot because you added a romance element (not just a sex story)

Anyways, I totally love the BDSM depiction :D

Have you been video taping me and my boyfriend? lol. No but seriously this was really really well written adn really really good story. Hehe. I loved it. I would love to see more of these on fictionpress.