wow this was great the only critisism i have is that i don't think you can really love someone if you call them names like that. i just can't imagine someone who loves you saying htose things. it was hot though!

Wow. this is...so great. I loved it. very hot..

m hawt.
need i say more?

wow... so hot and steamy..
I'm glad this didn't turn out to be only a sex scene story. I like the ending a lot because you added a romance element (not just a sex story)

Anyways, I totally love the BDSM depiction :D

Have you been video taping me and my boyfriend? lol. No but seriously this was really really well written adn really really good story. Hehe. I loved it. I would love to see more of these on fictionpress.

You wrote really well, great BDSM description. Loved the last bit.

This story was so well written, it's amazing. It will be, without a doubt, one of my favorites. The imagery and the characters were so real. Good job.

This was a very well written piece and I enjoyed it.
Good job.

im not into BDSM at all, this was disturbing, very, but it was very well written.
without the hightened bondage it would have been one of the best sex scenes ive ever read, the discription was amazing, the way you worded it was amazing, very visual, but the bondage part left me staring at my computer with wide eyes.
um yeah :/
im still highly disturbed but bravo in general..

im not really a BDSM person
(& i did read the warning :D) lol
but i think the ending was adorable :D