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| RaindropsOnBlackRoses 2008-07-22 ch 1,  | abusehaha that was awesome i feel bad for the guy, but it still seems funny to me at the same time. great job! |
| call me ish 2008-07-21 ch 1, | abuseshitshit. where to start? this was a story more than it was a moment. i don't know why that stood out so much in my mind, and i don't know if it was that there were storylines woven in here that everyone's been through, but it felt epic and monumental, and just everything you need on a monday night. and just.. when the rushed voice, and the sarcastic "whycantyousee" tone combined with your tendency for killer lines, what was born was this. this overwhelmingly real emotions filled bottle, shaken and stirred, exploding all over my fucking screen. |
| .mate.feed.kill.repeat. 2008-07-20 ch 1, | abuseThis is one of the most heart-breakingly unique pieces I've read in a long time. The way you wrote it (where you put your line breaks, word choice, flow, etc.) was intriguing but what you actually wrote was simply amazing. The emotions in this piece were another outstanding characteristic. The ending was so furious and ...something else I can't really figure out a word for. This piece was amazing. Great job. -stix- |