A good poem, a bit clichéd, but it was nicely done.

I liked it, good piece :)
Faith

great poem
i liked it a lot

konnichi wa

It was very poetic, so I definitely loved that. What I didn't like so much was the seemingly excessive use of parenthesis. The first one, the "(just like the / image of you holding someone else)" (which, by the way, was one of my favorite lines), was all right; but I think the others didn't need it.

Other than that, really and truly a beautiful poem. :) When I clicked on it, I thought, "Mm, I hope it's another of her lovely haikus to start my morning." Even though it wasn't, I was pleasantly surprised to find that it was a just as lovely way to start my morning. :D

All right, now I'm off to work.

Ha det
-Shan-