Really short, but I think that's a good thing, since it just makes it all the more effective. What a stark, honest, brutal, and in a way beautiful portrait of being single. My favourite part is "your breath matching up with / a shuddering fan," which I think is well-written, depressing, and says so much in one simple little image.

It is difficult. This was short, and sad, but honest. Which is always a positive. Good job.