Yay! You updated! Whee! Nice chapter! Oh yeah, I updated TCR with some chapters (37 and 38) though they may be a bit disturbing and partially graphic. Wanna see/review? Sorry to ask. Sorry about what happened to all your chapters. But keep up the good work!

Argh... I think this took a turn for the worst. For one, the typos seemed more prevalent and distracting than before. "Loose" is when something is not tight. "Lose" is the action of experiencing defeat. "They're" is the contraction of "They are", while "their" is the group version of "his" or "her".

The battle between Azumi and Noriko also seemed to raise a lot of confusion. I mean, how could they both fight so proficiently? And why dress up in the way they did... especially Noriko? Wouldn't she want something a little more subtle than a samurai outfit? The dialogue also seemed pretty clunky too during that moment, and you'd think Nuriko would be acting a lot more uncomfortable and awkward.

An interesting second chapter. Azumi is most likely the theif. You've got a pretty good plot going here as well as decent character development. I hope that you stick to this story, it has potential.

This was pretty good so far. I really like your build up and your plots and characters seem very real. I especially like Minako's character.

I like your build up of the plot as well and I didn't see any grammatical or punctuation errors. I'll be back to check out the next chapter when I get off of work. If you wish or have the time, feel free to check out some of my works.

Good luck on your writing and don't give up, you have a wonderful idea going.

Well, you're pretty much rubbed in our face that the noblewoman thief is Azumi. Don't try to deny it.

Anyways, this is a decent fic. Nothing fantastic yet, but that doesn't mean it can't be. It seems to carry a mix of Sailor Moon (the prologue) and Fushigi Yugi (the male savior) so far, but I can't really be so sure.

Anyways, this seems pretty interesting, and I look forward to you taking this in new and unique directions.

Well, this was a pretty good start, you've got the mystery of the Crimson Knight to keep readers enthralled, and the backstory is pretty clear.
The is starting to look like a good series, keep up the good work.

Yay! You updated! This is a good chapter! Keep up the good work!

Wow! I love this new version! I'm faving this and you! I did some stuff to TCR. Would you like to review the newest chapters?...if you read the entire story, I mean. Sorry I asked. Anyway, great job on improving your story! I'm doing adjustments to TCR chapter 2 but I'm not finished yet. Keep up the great work!