You have a genius imagination and are great at weaving words. It's lovely.

Absolutely fantastic! One of the best short stories I have ever read (and I mean it!). You captured the magic of childhood perfectly!

I'm definately adding this to my favorates list :)

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Mm... Delicious. *closes eyes* It makes me want to sleep outside tonight (though I may change my mind going outside and getting bitten up by mosquitos, LoL). This was like one long poem. Or a story made out of a web of poetry. Beautiful.

I don't know what it spoke to me yet, but I do know that it did. It's telling me something - I'm going to go think on it right now. Hey, not everything can fall into your lap. It just... it touched me, touched my heart. It's stunning. Just... *sigh*

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-Shan-