so i actually read the first chapter thinking it was a one-shot for some reason. then i saw the other chapters! regardless, i love it.

Ah cliffhanger! Update soon :)

Wow! This story is incredible! I love your characters and how you write them: They seem so real! And the story reads nicely. There's not too much description or dialogue. It's perfect! Can I have more...? ^_^

Hmm...J.D. I know of another name that begins with "J"...

More :)

this is getting better and better

nice job. :) i really like this.
is she going to see jake again?

M very interesting :) can't wait to read more

I like this so far; though so far it's mostly dialogue, your writing is very fluid and easy to read.

Would you mind r&ring my new story, Aftershock? :)

update soon:)

Oh wow, this is really good :)

glad to see you're writing

I, however, have been a littl lazy

nice job. its cool how her name is summer. by the title, i thought he was saving the season, not her...

I like where this story is going. It reminds me of the song Self Conclusion by The Spill Canvas. I'm excited to see what you do with this.

Interesting start. Nice description. Your main character sums up well the pain and doubts -- and relief -- about this subject. update soon.