Nice job rhyming. I like your poems but there are too many to read nice job.

On the contrary hun! I think this piece is really good. It's honest and it reads well. I think you did a great job with it, especially as you just think it was something you "just had to write." I think you should try some more spontaneous pieces like this. Just a shame it's not a happier inspiration *hugs*

That was very beautiful, and very heartfelt