Man, it's been a long-arse time since I've read this story! I had to reread it in order to even remember what happened so far! I love your new chpter! You have so much emotion in your characters. I feel bad for Ushio...Poor guy, though Tadao's hurt face made me feel bad for him too. I'm so torn vv;

I hope her brother is ok. She is going to have to take care of him now. They do have feelings for each other, she just doesn't know it yet, right? Good chapter, update soon.

This chapter was really, really good! I can tell that you've improved your writing style and you write everything wish such emotion! I can feel the despairity coming from the girl's perspective! I also love the fight scene between Tadao and Ushio!

I'm glad that you finally took this out of hiatus! I missed it!

I love the story...i really enjoy this...keep up the good work! ^^

Please write more!!
This has a really good story line!
Thankyou!

Really good first chapter. It was very scary how that blonde guy attacked her. Good thing the boyfriend was there to save the day!

Another wonderful prolouge. Loved how it was written. Heading over to the next chapter. :D

Hey you! Where the hell are you?! Finish this story now! XD it's really good!! hehehe x

I really like Takeshi and Endo. They are very cute together and Ushio is so protective of his siter. It's very cute in a wierd way and verges on obsession. I like it though and I hope that you update soon!

So far, this is really good. That one scene with Sumerie scared me. I was on th edge of my seat thinking about what would happen to her! I'm off to read more!

I'm not much for inscest but this sounds really good so far so I'm willing to give it a try!

Aww, but I like it!

This reminds me of two people I know in real life... >.>

More please? I see you haven't updated in a while...

It a good prologue I must say, jest look at it, it's good.

Hello there. Remember me? It's Firechick. I came across this story and I quite like it. It's quite well-written and it's understandable too! Good indeed! I just wanted to let you know that I've started a new story called Firefly's Enchantment. Just letting you know. Anyway, sorry I haven't read much of your stories. I've been busy and I have to do exams this week. We haven't seen each other in a while, have we? Anyway, I hope you continue to write your stories. You're a better writer than even I am! Keep up the good work!

Definitely an intriguing chapter with nice broXsis cuteness. I hope you take this work out of hiatus soon. I'd love to read more!