 ginger555 2009-10-23 . chapter 3I love the story...i really enjoy this...keep up the good work! ^^ |
 Edara 2009-09-09 . chapter 3Please write more!!
This has a really good story line!
Thankyou! |
 Niki Tori 2009-05-10 . chapter 2Really good first chapter. It was very scary how that blonde guy attacked her. Good thing the boyfriend was there to save the day! |
 Niki Tori 2009-05-10 . chapter 1Another wonderful prolouge. Loved how it was written. Heading over to the next chapter. :D |
 Abogerreboo 2009-04-30 . chapter 3Hey you! Where the hell are you?! Finish this story now! XD it's really good!! hehehe x |
 Lime-sama 2009-04-02 . chapter 3I really like Takeshi and Endo. They are very cute together and Ushio is so protective of his siter. It's very cute in a wierd way and verges on obsession. I like it though and I hope that you update soon! |
 Lime-sama 2009-04-02 . chapter 2So far, this is really good. That one scene with Sumerie scared me. I was on th edge of my seat thinking about what would happen to her! I'm off to read more! |
 Lime-sama 2009-04-02 . chapter 1I'm not much for inscest but this sounds really good so far so I'm willing to give it a try! |
 Ailani Hali'a 2009-03-26 . chapter 3Aww, but I like it!
This reminds me of two people I know in real life... >.>
More please? I see you haven't updated in a while... |
 Don-Jam 2009-03-11 . chapter 1It a good prologue I must say, jest look at it, it's good. |
 Julia Lucrezia Hanazono 2009-03-03 . chapter 3Hello there. Remember me? It's Firechick. I came across this story and I quite like it. It's quite well-written and it's understandable too! Good indeed! I just wanted to let you know that I've started a new story called Firefly's Enchantment. Just letting you know. Anyway, sorry I haven't read much of your stories. I've been busy and I have to do exams this week. We haven't seen each other in a while, have we? Anyway, I hope you continue to write your stories. You're a better writer than even I am! Keep up the good work! |
 HFGLF 2009-02-27 . chapter 3Definitely an intriguing chapter with nice broXsis cuteness. I hope you take this work out of hiatus soon. I'd love to read more! |
 HFGLF 2009-02-27 . chapter 2Poor Sumerie. I hope that that jerk dies or something. I hate people like that. I'm glad that her boyfriend and brother were there to take care of him. Her boyfriend seems like such a sweet guy. I'm also really liking Takeshi and Endo too. Your POV was very good and you described things so well! I'm addicted to this story now! |
 HFGLF 2009-02-27 . chapter 1This story is pretty well-known. I've been wanting to read it for a long time and now I finally get the chance. So, I will continued to read until the end. This story has a good start too. Nice job! |
 EsiuoL 2009-02-07 . chapter 3Hey there! Thanks so much for the review! XD
Omigosh! This is totally awesome! Wow! Though I don't usually like incestuous relationships, I found this really great! (I just watched 'I love my younger sister' so this kind of story caught my interest.) ^^
I do really hope you can update ASAP.
Ja! |