Reviews for Diary of Newmerica
Kneecap 7/26/08 . chapter 2
CHILLING.

The only word I can think of.

Nothing more to add.
Kneecap 7/26/08 . chapter 1
I read this when you put it on Facebook...

It's completely and utterly bizarre. But as sci-fi comes and goes: I love it. I'm not so fond of the situation they're in, but you really get a sense of how brainwashed the kid os through his naievete.

The only qualm I have is with what the 'bearded man' says. I'm not so sure anyone would start a speech with four synonyms of the same word. And 'blatantly' was used (in the next sentence) superfluously.

Otherwise: an ace start :D!