|Reviews for Diary of Newmerica|
| Kneecap 7/26/08 . chapter 2
The only word I can think of.
Nothing more to add.
| Kneecap 7/26/08 . chapter 1
I read this when you put it on Facebook...
It's completely and utterly bizarre. But as sci-fi comes and goes: I love it. I'm not so fond of the situation they're in, but you really get a sense of how brainwashed the kid os through his naievete.
The only qualm I have is with what the 'bearded man' says. I'm not so sure anyone would start a speech with four synonyms of the same word. And 'blatantly' was used (in the next sentence) superfluously.
Otherwise: an ace start :D!