It's simply perfect! I do love it! :)

This is really good. I see how the little girl in the black dress is you. it really is a lovely piece. sad, but i like the happy ending. was this before, or after you met the boyfriend that you told me about?

Aww, this is so adorable and cute! :D

that was the most adorable and deep thing i've ever read! good job!

Ah, cute. It was short, but well done. I enjoyed reading it.

- Koki