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Jestry 2008-08-08 . chapter 1
Oh wow.
I can so relate to everything, because I'm also one of those dorks who go to anime conventions.

I stalk people on Deviantart. I try to cosplay. I integrate random internet slang like "L-O-L, no" into my daily dialogue.

The story is kind of... chaotic.
So, sorry if I get this wrong.
James is Jesus-cosplayer-guy's brother. Dennis is his random friend.
Main character has an instant attraction towards Dennis (who has a girlfriend), but deep down inside is developing a budding attraction for James? Umm, sorry if that made no sense; ignore me. :<

But then again.
Fanime was so darn chaotic, that I guess, crashing into 5 different people all in the course of two hours isn't exactly improbable.

Nice setting. Nice theme. Nice plot. It's very original, and I don't think I've read a story quite like this, ever. Keep it up. (:
TuneOut 2008-08-01 . chapter 1
This was rather fluffy with almost no drama but I liked it since it was done well. I liked that your character was a real geek rather than a pretty girl who said that she was a geek. Your characterization was wonderful. You are a fantastic writer.
Dot Cubed 2008-07-22 . chapter 1
This is adorable! I have never been to Comic-Con but I know all the booths you were talking about so it's exciting, haha! Anyway, James is so cute and for some reasons all the references to Jesus just cracked me up, probably because if you take them completely out of context they're hilarious. (ex: "I'm going to go follow Jesus" hahaha I laughed FOREVER)

Anyway, this was a nice cute little fluffy piece and I loved it!
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