 Dale Christopher 2009-04-19 . chapter 1I know it's silly, but even though this was kind of funny I mostly felt sad when I read it. It reminded me of a line from Garden State (I can't remember if you've seen that movie) where Sam is burying her pat hamster and when she's saying goodbye she finishes with the line "I hope you liked me." That always made me kind of sad. But this was very well written, it was vivid and cute. I liked it. |
 Unforgettable-PoeticDreamer 2008-08-19 . chapter 1This made me laugh. lol.
I could watch the scene play out in my mind as I read; I love reading something that can make me do that. You used very good details that allowed me to do this and ovrall I think that you did a very good job writing this. |
 Broken and Bleeding Wolf 2008-07-28 . chapter 1That's cute. Go little earthworm! |
 lisa.con.amor 2008-07-24 . chapter 1I really liked this; it made me chuckle. :) I especially liked that last apologetic line, it kind of made the piece for me.
I feel compelled to also mention that the advertisement on the top of the page as I read exclaimed "Enhance you garden with worms!" and talked of creating you own compost. An unintentional but extremely well-placed touch. ;) |
 JD Kirkland- KH 2008-07-23 . chapter 1Wow, that's funny, but great... loved it! :-) |
 pheer 2008-07-22 . chapter 1you put a smile on my face. :) |
 Living in a fantasy 2008-07-22 . chapter 1Hehe, funny. Yet I sort of figured out what this would be about, obviously by the title. Lol. It was short and sweet. |